We had to sit our groups... in my group was Me, Sharon and Edward. Two of the people in our group had to present, our treatment to the class and Miss Nair by reading it out; when they had finished everyone had to give their opinions on what they thought about it, whilst they were doing this I had to write down their feedback so below is what they thought.
One of our classmate, Rachel said that she thought the treatment went really well with the genre as you can tell straight away what it fits into however the part about when the Alison murders Ricardo because he wouldn’t be with her... was very confusing. She argued that “If you claim you love someone why would you then kill the person. Wouldn’t you do your best to get them back?” in addition to this Iman brought up other points in the treatment that did not make sense like... “How comes Ricardo liked Alison a lot but yet he went out with one of the girls who bullied her?” and “How was it possible that they broke up twice” all of these things cause confusion, themes were not continuous so therefore there “no character motivation!”
In teen romance people make mistakes but nothing happens to them... all the drama makes the story heavy so it is needed to be lighter. In teen romance everyone is meant be happy at the end. All the drama makes the opening sequence seem as if it is a scene when opening sequence are meant to be gentle. Overall our class mate thought the treatment was good.
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