Feedback from about my adopted fairytale:
The theme unity are very clear as the class said that they could see that it was love and jealousy… they went on to say that the fairytale starts off well as you can picture what happens in your head; the middle is clear but the plot point needs to be more dramatic. (“The bad parts are the most important so they should portray stronger ending”) Overall the characters were developed well and it was good.
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