Feedback from class:
- Really went with the genre (teenage romance)
- The murder part was random
- It was good but confusing because how can ‘he really like her but he went after getting bullied
- There was no character motivation
- Every confusing, ‘how did they break up twice’
- People make mistakes all the time in teenage romance but nothing extreme happens
- It needs to be more light.
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